held in a circle felt though our arms were empty that same star was with us then and that one too I don’t recall the moon or what lit your face we rotate now upon every dawn this star closest to us warms us unfolds us we stretch towards it as a newborn’s eyes and here is now held in a circle better to hold hands here so to still be when we take a peek this is who we are this is where we are so we are now us?
THAT is one of the nicest compliments I’ve received! Thank you so much, Elizabeth! Yeah, my brain is finagling those last four lines into music already.
I think I told Paul…my drummer called me and said I forgot to put the music on this post! lol. I appreciate the kind words, Patris…it was my first try at an actual poem with— no pun intended— no strings attached!
"if we listen as often as we breathe"
THAT is one of the most wonderful sentences I have ever beheld...
THAT is one of the nicest compliments I’ve received! Thank you so much, Elizabeth! Yeah, my brain is finagling those last four lines into music already.
Can’t wait!!
You got it, Sea!
I actually was nervous before I hit the publish button. Thanks Paul!
Love this 🤍
Thanks, Caroline!❤️
A beautiful love song. The images surround us.
I think I told Paul…my drummer called me and said I forgot to put the music on this post! lol. I appreciate the kind words, Patris…it was my first try at an actual poem with— no pun intended— no strings attached!
The poem itself sang. Beautiful ones do. I didn’t see a link to music but I didn’t miss it.
What a beautiful thing to say, Patris ❤️
I want to thank the following for re-stacking this post @Elisabeth Donati @Thaissa Lara @The Rewind & @Amy — so much appreciated!
And thanks to all for the restack!